Changeset ff189e7

Timestamp:

Jun 14, 2014 9:15:55 AM (7 years ago)

Author:

kytv <kytv@…>

Branches:

master

Children:

8845ce6

Parents:

89c07ac9

Message:

slackbuild: minor changes to the comments

Location:

Slackware/i2p

Files:

• doinst.sh (modified) (1 diff)
• i2p.SlackBuild (modified) (4 diffs)
• rc.i2p (modified) (2 diffs)

Slackware/i2p/doinst.sh

@@ -13 +13 @@
     OLD="$(dirname $NEW)/$(basename $NEW .new)"
     if [ ! -r $NEW ]; then
-        # Flaw in the packaging, this shouldn't happen. Just return.
+        # If we get here there's a flaw in the packaging. We'll just return so that
+        # we don't emit a spurious error for the user. (It's not the user's problem).
         return
     fi
 
-    # If this file doesn't exist yet, drop the .new extension
+    # If this file doesn't exist yet, drop the .new extension.
     if [ ! -r $OLD ]; then
         mv $NEW $OLD
         return
     elif [ "$(md5sum $OLD | cut -d' ' -f1)" = "$(md5sum $NEW | cut -d' ' -f1)" ]; then
-        # If there are no differences in the files, remove the new one
+        # If there are no differences in the files, remove the file with the .new extension.
         rm $NEW
         return
     fi
-    # If they differ alert the admin (but let's not be terribly obnoxious about it)
+    # Alert the admin if they differ, but let's not be terribly obnoxious about it.
     echo "WARNING: The files $OLD and $NEW differ." >&2
 }

Slackware/i2p/i2p.SlackBuild

@@ -12 +12 @@
 #
 # For safety's sake, a user's I2P config files will *never* be overwritten by any upgrade method.
-# In the future this SlackBuild may alert when a default config file is updated
+# In the future this SlackBuild may alert when a default config file is updated.
 ##
 
@@ -56 +56 @@
 # If the version is x.y, it'll be set to x.y.0. Otherwise the version string will be unchanged
 CORE=$(awk -F'"' '/static\s+String\s+VERSION/{print $2}' $I2PSRC/core/java/src/net/i2p/CoreVersion.java | \
-        awk -F. '{ if (NF > 3) { print; exit } else if ($3 == "") { $3=0; print $1"."$2"."$3 } else print }')
+        awk -F. '{ if (NF > 3) { print; exit } else if ($3 == "") { $3=0; print $1"."$2"."$3 } else print }')
 VERSION="${CORE}_${I2PBUILD}"
 
@@ -83 +83 @@
 mv licenses LICENSE.txt -t $PKG/usr/doc/$NAME-$VERSION
 
-# runplain will live in the installation directory. eepget and i2prouter will go to /usr/bin
+# runplain.sh will live in the installation directory. eepget and i2prouter will go to /usr/bin
 # with symlinks in INST_DIR (created in doinst.sh)
 install -m755 i2prouter $PKG/usr/bin
@@ -104 +104 @@
 # to figure out the correct wrapper binary to use.
 
-# Howver: In case the i2prouter script's detection fails, "$INST_DIR/i2psvc" will point to
+# However: In case the i2prouter script's detection fails, "$INST_DIR/i2psvc" will point to
 # what 'we' think the correct binary is.
 #

Slackware/i2p/rc.i2p

@@ -15 +15 @@
 # Note: this is not the same as the language shown in the I2P router console.
 # This affects the locale used in wrapper.log. For best results, use a
-# unicode enabled locale (especially important for foreign language torrents).
+# unicode enabled locale. This is especially important for foreign language torrents.
 #
 # If not set the user's configured locale will be used.
@@ -46 +46 @@
 fi
 
-# abort script if any variables are unset
+# Abort this script if any referenced variables haven't been set
 set -u